The effect of putting a period after each sentence makes it seem like its more in your face and it’s making her point come across more clearly. The shorter sentences that she has made with the poem, have more of an attitude and just tells you what’s up and how she really feels. I think that if she would have made these into longer sentences, it would not have its point as well. The poem really shows you how she feels about how her people were treated way back when like with the fourth last sentence, “Yeah, it was awful what you guys did to us.” Now that sentence truly tells you, yeah she is not to impressed with us White people and how we treated the Indians like trash. Even though I do not agree with her because I think it is time for them to get over it and stop complaining since they can do just about whatever they want now like spear fish whenever they want and pretty much ruin the wildlife by taking out to much at one time….
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